You deserve honest,
actionable feedback
on your novel manuscript.
If you’re ready for a
professional review of
your story that honors
your creative vision,
let’s work together!
Developmental Editor * Book Coach * Workshop Leader
You started writing this book because you had a story you wanted to tell.
And you took that idea from something that hung out in your mind’s eye to words on the page. After hours and hours (and hours!) of work, you brought your characters to life on the page. You believe in this story, in what you have to say, and how it can impact others. But before you put your story out into the world, you’re ready for another set of eyes.
Books aren’t written…
They’re rewritten.
—Michael Crichton
Developmental Editing,
Book Coaching, &
Query letter Review
for Fiction Writers
Because your story matters
You’re on a journey to share your story. I’m here to help you write your way into your full potential.
If you’re sensing the gap between what’s in your mind’s eye and your words on the page, you’ve come to the right place.
Whether you’ve been writing for one year or twenty, that gap affects everyone... and I mean EVERYONE. Figuring out how to bring your writing more fully to life can feel like your own frustrating (and epically challenging!) version of The Odyssey.
But your story matters – and you don’t have to go it alone. You don’t have to scour the internet for random advice. You don’t have to open up to opinions from family or friends who “read a lot.” And you definitely don’t need to seek out “brutally honest feedback” with the belief that harsh words are the only thing that can help you improve.
With the right support, writing can (and should!) be fun, empowering, and energizing. And no matter where you are in your journey as a writer, I’m here to set you up with personally tailored tools to help you move forward.
NEED HELP GETTING (OR STAYING) ON TRACK?
If you’re unsure about where to take your story, book coaching offers you the guidance, accountability, and support to move ahead with confidence and get those words on the page.
Book Coaching
Query Letter Review
WANT TO SNAG A LITERARY AGENT’S ATTENTION?
Let’s make your query letter irresistible. Get constructive, actionable feedback designed to help you pitch with confidence from an industry expert.
Developmental Editing
YOU’VE JUST TYPED THE END. NOW WHAT?
Congratulations on finishing your manuscript! Now let’s make sure it’s as polished as possible before sharing it with the world. Prepare for your chance to impress with expert and industry-seasoned editing!
I'm the enthusiastic, veteran editor and book coach for writers ready for professional feedback.
Every writer needs a trusted set of second eyes.
Hi! I’m Jackie! Whether you're wrestling with a first draft, revising a completed manuscript, or preparing to query agents, you don't have to figure it out alone. I provide thoughtful, actionable feedback that helps you move forward with confidence. You’re in the right place if:
⇒ You want one-on-one guidance, support, and accountability.
⇒ You want to deepen your understanding of the craft and write a stronger novel.
⇒ You’re ready for honest, actionable feedback that respects your voice.
⇒ You know you have an important story to share with the world but need help figuring out the next steps.
My approach blends my twenty years of professional experience at two Big Five publishing houses with a background teaching creative writing and the perspective of someone who is in the writing trenches. (Yes, I’m a writer, too!).
The result is feedback that's honest, practical, and always focused on helping you become a stronger storyteller.
Some of the Wonderful Books I’ve Edited…
Kind Words from Fellow Writers
Working with Jackie has proven to be a high value investment in the process of publishing my first book. The levels of expertise, detail, care, and attention that she provided has not only set me up for success, but she has taught me invaluable insights on how to craft a story that is engaging and satisfying. The quality of Jackie's work, notes, advice and feedback went beyond expectations. The personal interest and care she put into my manuscript, characters and overall themes were astounding. I'm not only anticipating rewriting with the useful edits she suggested, but also working with her again in the future.
-Heather O.
Jackie is a superb editor. Her notes were extensive, instructive and clear. She was brilliantly encouraging which made the whole experience positive and uplifting. I've worked with other editors, but Jackie is in another league, easily surpassing my expectations. I wouldn't hesitate to recommend her to other writers at whatever stage they are in their careers. She gets booked up quickly, but I promise she's worth the wait!
-Christina P.
Jackie was fantastic to work with. She provided excellent, concise, and clear notes that all made sense. When I was considering quotes from editors, she was happy to answer any questions I had and was always prompt with her responses - despite the five-hour time difference! I really enjoyed talking to her on Zoom, where she allowed me to ask any question about her notes - no question was too small or silly!
-Molly H.
Pick Jackie! She is an excellent editor and knows the publishing business well. Her comments were very thoughtful and she provided me exactly what I needed in a development edit of my first draft. She provided me with so much to digest, including many questions I need to answer about my story and my characters. Thank you, Jackie! If one day I am lucky enough to get published, I know she will have played a major role in putting me in the best possible position to achieve that goal.
-Scott J.
Jackie made me feel like I have something to say, my work is valuable, and my story is worth telling. She brought up excellent points, always with workable solutions ready. I've learned so much about the craft! And my characters have a better chance of landing on a shelf near you, because Jackie helped me bring them to life. I'm so grateful!
-Juliana W.
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