Book Coaching
for Fiction Writers
Big Ideas?
Let’s make them
unforgettable.
You don’t have to figure this out alone
You’ve got a draft—or maybe just the beginnings of one—and a hundred questions circling in your head.
Is this working?
Am I on the right track?
Why does this feel so much harder than it should?
If vague advice from a well-meaning blog or a writing group that says, “just keep going,” hasn’t been helpful, book coaching can get you on track. You need real guidance. A personalized plan. Someone who can look at your work and tell you what’s clicking, what’s not, and how to move forward with confidence.
Here’s where a professional Book Coach can help.
We’ll bring structure to your process, accountability to your goals, and clear, professional insight to every stage of your manuscript.
No more spinning your wheels or second-guessing every choice. Just steady progress—from draft to done—with someone experienced in your corner. Most writers I work with are wrestling with one (or more) of these concerns:
“I don’t know if this idea is actually working.”
You’ve been playing with your story idea, it’s hard to see it clearly. You’re second-guessing plot choices, character arcs, even the core idea. With coaching, you get honest, professional feedback that cuts through the noise, so you know what’s strong, what needs work, and exactly how to fix it.
“I keep starting, but I can’t seem to finish.”
Life gets busy. The draft stalls. Weeks (or months) slip by, and your momentum disappears. (As a writer, I’ve been there too!) Coaching offers structure, deadlines, and built-in accountability to keep you moving forward—consistently, and without burnout.
“I need real guidance, not just general advice.”
You’ve tried critique groups or online tips, but nothing feels tailored to your story or your goals. Coaching gives you personalized, big-picture support from someone who understands storytelling and the publishing landscape, so every step you take is intentional.
We’ll take your specific challenges and turn them into a clear, actionable path forward with someone in your corner every step of the way.
Book Coaching
Book coaching is a 1:1, collaborative partnership designed to support you at every stage of your writing process—whether you’re just getting started, deep in a draft, or revising an existing manuscript.
When you work with me as your book coach, we’ll meet for regular check-in calls and pair those conversations with thoughtful, written feedback on your work—so you’re supported both in the moment and on the page.
To build momentum, we start with a group of six sessions. We can add more sessions as needed.
Book coaching is:
—> having an experienced partner in your corner—someone who can see your story clearly, offer honest, professional feedback, and help you make steady, confident progress from idea to finished draft.
Book coaching isn’t:
—> about being judged or told you’re “doing it wrong.” It’s not about changing your voice or following a rigid formula. This is your story. I’m here to help you shape it, not override it.
Here’s how it works
Check-in sessions
We’ll meet for regular 30-minute Zoom calls to check on your progress, talk through challenges, and map out next steps. You’ll leave each session with focused goals and the momentum to keep moving forward.
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Review
You’ll share your work-in-progress pages ahead of our sessions, so I can see exactly where you are in the draft. This means our time together is always grounded in your story—making every conversation relevant, specific, and immediately useful.
2)
Feedback
I read your pages with both a big-picture and detail-oriented lens—looking at structure, pacing, character development, and what’s already working beautifully. You’ll gain a clearer understanding of your strengths as a writer, not just what needs fixing.
3)
ongoing support
You’re not on your own between sessions. If you hit a sticking point, have a question, or just want to share a win, you can reach out. I’m here to support you through the in-between moments, too. Writing can feel isolating, but this process gives you a steady, encouraging presence every step of the way.
4)
Progress over perfection…
With the right support, the writing process starts to feel different.
More focused. More intentional. Less overwhelming.
You’re no longer guessing your way through each chapter, you’re understanding why something works, and how to keep building on it. You’re making decisions with clarity and purpose. When challenges come up (and they will), you’ll know how to move through them.
And when you reach the end, you don’t just have a finished draft. You have a novel that feels aligned with your original spark—the book you couldn’t quite access on your own, but always knew was there.
Jackie was fantastic to work with. She provided excellent, concise, and clear notes that all made sense. When I was considering quotes from editors, she was happy to answer any questions I had and was always prompt with her responses - despite the five-hour time difference! I really enjoyed talking to her on Zoom, where she allowed me to ask any question about her notes - no question was too small or silly!
-Molly H.
Just a few of the authors
at the heart of this work…
Pick Jackie! She is an excellent editor and knows the publishing business well. Her comments were very thoughtful and she provided me exactly what I needed in a development edit of my first draft. She provided me with so much to digest, including many questions I need to answer about my story and my characters. Thank you, Jackie! If one day I am lucky enough to get published, I know she will have played a major role in putting me in the best possible position to achieve that goal.
-Scott J.
Hey there, I’m Jackie…
the book coach who can help you move from draft to done.
When we work together, I’ll be in your corner to clarify your vision and strengthen your instincts.
I’m here for accountability, momentum, and guidance.
I treat your manuscript as if it were my own—because I’m a writer, too. I’m not here to change your vision or your voice. I want our partnership to spark those “aha” moments, one after another, so revision feels less overwhelming and more energizing.
You’ll come away with a clear, thoughtful roadmap—and the confidence to stay in the driver’s seat, without that knot-in-your-stomach feeling.
I’m honored to be entrusted with your words, and I don’t take that trust lightly. I’m looking forward to working with you!
Book coaching isn’t for everyone…and that’s okay!
Book Coaching might be for you if:
You have an idea, draft, or messy middle—and you want clear, professional guidance to help you shape it into something that truly works.
You’re tired of vague advice and want thoughtful, personalized feedback that’s specific to your story and your goals.
You’re ready to stay engaged in the process, do the work, and have a collaborative partner to help you move forward with confidence.
You want support that helps you strengthen your voice, trust your instincts, and finish a draft you believe in.
If you’re looking for someone to “fix” your manuscript for you or tell you exactly what to write at every step, coaching will likely feel frustrating. This process is not a quick fix or a passive experience—it’s a collaborative one, built on trust, curiosity, and a genuine commitment to the work.
Check out a more comprehensive developmental edit here.
I’m here for your questions!
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If your novel is…
romance (all subgenres)
women’s fiction (all subgenres)
historical
YA / MG
upmarket/book club
speculative
contemporary
—or a hybrid of those genres, I’d love to hear from you!
If you’re outside of these genres, please send me a message. I’m happy to see if we’e be a good fit!
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Not at all! I’ve worked with writers who are starting from the glimmer of an idea, and others who have gotten stuck after several chapters.
If you’re struggling with overwhelm or need accountability to maintain your momentum, I can help!
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Yes! This is the perfect time to work with a book coach! I can guide you from story premise to finished draft — and at any point along the way. I’m happy to talk through your situation!
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For a developmental edit, I’ll review your completed story and provide professional feedback.
Book coaching is a collaborative process where we work together on a weekly basis to review your progress.
Because of the highly integrative nature of book coaching, I work with only a few writers at a time.
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Absolutely! I typically structure payments as follows:
25% to hold the schedule
25% when I begin editing
50% when feedback is complete
I’m happy to break down the payments until smaller installments— without any extra fees!
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As a book coach, I’m here to help you clarify your vision, not replace it. My goal is to strengthen your voice and instincts—not override them.
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Since book coaching is a bespoke process, the timing varies depending on where you are in the process.
We’ll start with a minimum of six sessions and then add as needed.
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I do not use any AI platforms when editing or offering feedback. All of your work will be read by me and editorial reports will be written by me.
Your work will be treated with the highest ethical standards.
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I’m happy to answer any editing or book coaching question you have!
Reach out via the contact form and let me know what’s on your mind.
No question is too
big or too small!
Let’s do this!
